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雅思写作9月3日范文一览(附范文使用方法)

2016-09-07

来源:环球教育

小编:环球教育 103
摘要:

 Some people think that having many TV channels is good because it gives people a lot of choices. Other people think that it only results in a lot of poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 20160903

  No one can deny the irreplaceable position of television in people’s lives in this present-day society. With a growing number of TV channels emerging in TV sets, optimists of this issue assert that TV programs will definitely bring them more enjoyment, whereas the pessimists suppose that an increasing number of low quality TV programs will be what people can only see by the screens of their living rooms.

 Not only can people gain relaxation from watching TV in their sofa, but also watching TV has been the most dominant method for people to access to necessary information. Some others even use TV sets to learn some skills or doing other things. Hence, more TV channels can offer more abundant information for various audiences. Sports channels will always be the first choice for sports fans, and meanwhile news channels are invariably ready for who want to know what is happening domestically and internationally. What people need to do is buying more TV sets for their family members to avoid them fighting over the remote control.

  On the other hand, people with pessimistic views to this phenomenon would like to argue that more TV channels can only lead to the increase of low quality TV programs. Actually, more TV channels do provide audiences more choices, and thus arouse more competition in this industry. Producers of TV programs will rack their brain to find out attractive ideas to catch audiences’ eyeballs. Simultaneously, companies making TV programs will be willing to invest more fund in order to produce competitive programs. By analogy, appearance of low quality TV programs is what those people mistakenly foresee. Competition is the original driving force for advancement of an industry. 

  On the basis of the above discussion, unquestionably the populace do profit from watching a various variety of TV channels, and meanwhile what they can enjoy is TV programs that are much more splendid than before but not shoddy ones.

  那如何使用优秀范文呢?我们从以下几个方面来说明一下。

  一、积累词汇和短语

  雅思写作也有自己的高频词汇,不过,好像大多数同学专门备考词汇的方式并没有产生一个好的效果。所以小编建议大家在范文中寻找高频词汇来备考,一来可以加深词汇的意思,二来也记住了词汇的用法。小编在这里特别强调一下短语的备考。因为很多同学对英语固定搭配的短语总是记错用错,从而导致大量失分。

  二、借鉴高分句式

  雅思写作四大评分标准中有一项就是考察大家语法的掌握能力。考官看的不仅是大家有没有犯语法错误,犯了哪些语法错误和犯了几个语法错误,还会看大家有没有使用一些复杂句式,使用了几种高级句型。如果同学们能够在写作中少犯语法错误,同时写出大量的加分句式,比如说,名词性从句(主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句)、定语从句、状语从句、并列句、省略句、插入语、非谓语结构等等,考官自然会在这一项上给一个高分。

  三、学习文中的衔接与连贯,了解段落写作方法

  最简单的衔接与连贯就是连词了,在雅思范文中注意出现的自己不常用的那些词如:nevertheless,whereas,consequently,enhance等。比较高级的衔接与连贯就是分词,从句了,如“Zidane decided to retire from football,claiming that he had accomplished all the goals he had wanted to achieve.”如果文章里有表示顺序的词,要特别注意那些我们不常用的词。

  同时要借鉴段落写作方法,了解文章框架。比如:如何引入?如何展开?引用事实,数据,或者说理?有什么方法值得我们借鉴?有哪些内容我们可以引用?同学们须多思考总结。

  四、积累素材

  从范文中积累素材很好理解,比如说我们可以从一篇有关环境保护的文章中了解到一些保护环境的措施方法,那就可以借过来用在自己的环保类文章写作中。因为很多时候我们可能因为对一些话题的不熟悉不了解,导致自己无法从自身的生活经历中找到一些充分的素材或者说论据来支撑自己的观点。为了让文章更加丰满,论据充分而新颖,借鉴高分范文中的素材是我们很好的一个选择。

  五、作为写作模板

  这里的写作模板主要是指学习高分范文的写作思路、借鉴它们的文章结构和逻辑。中国考生写英语作文的时候习惯先用中文打一个草稿,然后再翻译成英文。这样写出来的文章非常具有中式思维,不符合英语写作的习惯思维,让考官看起来可能有点费解。所以我们一定要多看看英语范文,看看它们是如何构思文章,安排文章的逻辑,布局文章的结构,形成一篇论断缜密的议论文。

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